Firstly, welcome! I really like your name, too. I am a C'er so unfortunately I'm not the best one to give you advice about your D but Casey already has given you some good advice and there are lots of others who will have a lot more to share with you. I am also near Toronto so I thought that was pretty cool - and very cool that you write teen fiction. Have you ever published anything. I wrote a children's story in my last year of high school, so 2 yrs ago and was encouraged to get it published. However its a long process - I think I ended up sending it to two places - one at a time of course. The one wasn't looking for that "at this time" and the other said they had just published a story that was quite similar and didn't want to have two of the same! Ah well, I just thought that was pretty cool! How old are you btw?